domingo, 5 de septiembre de 2010

Day 5

Day 5: I went to the same building than last photo again, since I still had to take this one. Cropped it a bit to help composition following the comments on the Day 4 photo. For some reason I think I got the bottom left part too dark and distracting, but I don't know.

11 comentarios:

  1. I like it. The diagonal cuts the image into two parts and both sides have some interest. I think I would have been tempted to remove the little distracting line in the lower left corner so that it was a cleaner grey triangle, and also chosen a darker and thinner border to contain the image, but you have seen the lines and shapes extremely well. Good job.

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  2. I agree with Kim, both about removing the lower triangle in the bottom left and also about the border, but as for the composition of your abstract, I love it and the colors very much.

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  3. A definite improvement! Nicely composed and that lower left section could very easily be cloned out.

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  4. Ditto the above comments but I really like the subtle colours here, also the shapes and angles.

    sgatanstu

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  5. I like the soft colors, with the hard lines. Nice shot.

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  6. I like the diagonal element of this abstract!

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  7. I like it just as it is and I think that lovely summery sky really adds to the photo as a whole.

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  8. This is my favourite so far, great lines all round to make for cool image. Well done for seeing it.

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  9. Very nice abstract, like yesterdays but better!!

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  10. I like the whole feel of this - I don't think the bottom left is distracting at all. It completes the picture.

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  11. Very nice.
    What a great angles.
    I like the different colors as well.

    egonlinden

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